Comments for Prism of Perception

Comment on CONVERSATION 17 by Sarah

Sarah — Thu, 23 Jun 2011 23:38:47 +0000

HAH!! I love these conversations, they make me think a lot and try to guess what the other being is saying. Interesting, I have always wondered about this. My history teacher used to say “Imagine how great the world would be if women ruled it?!” and I agreed with him. Thank you for writing this brilliant article. I enjoyed it a lot.

Comment on ANANCY by kredyty bez bik

kredyty bez bik — Fri, 17 Sep 2010 17:56:38 +0000

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Comment on ANANCY by Dorian Ramy

Dorian Ramy — Wed, 15 Sep 2010 15:45:24 +0000

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Comment on Youky Onna by Lyme disease

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Comment on ANANCY by John

John — Fri, 10 Sep 2010 01:11:25 +0000

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Comment on Youky Onna by Robert

Robert — Wed, 11 Aug 2010 19:14:44 +0000

I am sorry to report that I barely got through the first paragraph. The story needs more whitespace. Paragraphs usually set thoughts apart and allow for more white-space to show up. This makes it so much easier for the reader.

My second comment is in respect to your use of past tense verbs (was, had been). Using more active verbs will keep your story present and alive. Something is happening!

Notice that sentence I just wrote, ‘will keep your story present…’ Imagine writing it this way, ‘active verbs keep your story present.’ Simply removing the past tense verb ‘will’ already improves it’s life!

Keep writing!

Robert
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Comment on Mussafaheel by cant get over my ex

cant get over my ex — Mon, 02 Aug 2010 16:40:40 +0000

This could be one of the most important post I ever studied in a long time, I’m speaking about this part of your post “……” it also made me recall about the day I met my husband.

Comment on Youky Onna by Tattoo Removal

Tattoo Removal — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 16:06:19 +0000

I think that is an interesting point, it made me think a bit. Thanks for sparking my thinking cap. Sometimes I get so much in a rut that I just feel like a record.

Comment on CONVERSATION 15 by Lilit

Lilit — Tue, 29 Jun 2010 14:21:35 +0000

LOL!!! I love it!! you are very gifted in writing and i hope you make a lot more, this is really entertaining and funny. I will be fallowing you and you stories, thank you you really cheered me up. As for the other articles, I couldn’t agree any more and i hope that one day the world will learn peace. The other invention like articles were ingenious! they were absolutely spectacular! Anyway I loved all your stories and would love to read more….
you will be seeing me often now.